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| HideAwayFairy 2005-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagry you givve, especially the "Granny in the rocking chair" stanza. Nice work! |
| negligible fictional force 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abusei caught my tears in a paper cup and recycled it, and thank you darling, you are so sweet. your abstractness grows better everyday, you are arthouse film i should think. have fun at CAP i will be sitting on the beach with my fellow rejects racing the tide heh. XD oh yongquan this poem is so. comforting. like ripping open a wound and then healing it for me i think. i am rejuvenated. and i don't know what else to say. but oh. -kismet. oh, and happy birthday a few days in advance heh. XD |
| really 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abusethey cried wolf, wolf but nobody believed them. this is unforgettable. |
| Cyssel 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuselove the various images you bring out, with an excellent choice of words. -fakeblu.inc p.s. another CAPer, I see, will see you there then =) |
| reicheru 2005-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseglad to see you back yeah (:okay. i reviewed this but it didnt seem to register. nvm. loved the poem's.. personal feeling? hahass. didn't really get the part on child and fool, but i guess when i think about it more i'll get it. yay.liked the first stanza and the one on the granny. hahass.okie well-done poem! (btw love you melly! yay.) reich. |