Beautiful, so sad and gripping in the different emotions of wanting to leave and yet still loving and being held back by that person and one's emotions. The rhymes flow wonderfully and melt together harmoniously with the rhythm and word choice to make this a really beaitufl piece.

Wow your poetry is so amazing!! I'm just in awe. I only wish i knew what it was about. The sense of wonder and the way you let the readers mind drift to imagine is good :)

Aw. So sad, yet beautiful as well. Tragic. I enjoyed this very much. Keep it up!

~Hawke

Oh, this is beautiful. I'm adding it to my favorites! Thanks for reviewing my poem, not only because I love reviews but also because I probably wouldn't have come across this lovely poem of yours otherwise. It's truly gorgeous, heartfelt, and deep. Keep up the good work!

Quite simply, beautiful. This was striking in an unexpected way. Its full of emotion, and I love the last 3 lines.

PS: Thanks for your review, I like your style so I will definitly read more.

Very cryptic and emotional. Defenitely my kind of poem. I adore the last four lines and just repeating them over and over in my head makes me think about how much I relate to the poem. Greatness!

This is a cool poem! Thank you for your reviews of my work. I like the flow and imagery of this poem and you did a good job converying feeling and emotion throughout.

this was a very enthrilling poem, full of emotion, love, thoughts, and all these elements created an atmosphere for this poem to be super effective.

"for one more nightto look into your eyessearching for my lightdid you know you still hold me?even after it alleven after I leave youeven after I fall..."

aww...I loved that line...keep it up!

This is sad in a way. The idea that life even love will change is a sad feeling. Well done.

Wonderful. You can feel the emotion in these words so easily, you get wrapped up in them. The word choice and ability to flow nicely were good too. Great job.

this is truely beautiful. You should print your poems and take them to a publisher. I have a friend who did that. She is amazing

wow, this is really pretty! well not pretty parsay but it like it. It flows really well.

Lovely I Like it.

great poem!!