   The Proxy Ninja 2005-06-28 . chapter 1This is beautiful- everything about it. |
 catseyeview 2005-04-15 . chapter 1I like the politeness of the mirror! good imagery again |
 Ohmm 2005-04-05 . chapter 1Ooh hello I don't know you but nevermind! Beautiful choice of words that lets the reader see the scene in his mind, well done! |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-03 . chapter 1Sweet sorrow. |
 Nanashiko 2005-04-01 . chapter 1Awesome imagery!
"Eyeballs spinning in a 360-degrees fashion." I like this line alot.
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