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| The Proxy Ninja 2005-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseThis is beautiful- everything about it. |
| catseyeview 2005-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI like the politeness of the mirror! good imagery again |
| Ohmm 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseOoh hello I don't know you but nevermind! Beautiful choice of words that lets the reader see the scene in his mind, well done! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseSweet sorrow. |
| Nanashiko 2005-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAwesome imagery! "Eyeballs spinning in a 360-degrees fashion." I like this line alot. Keep writing! |