awe cute!
a tad rushed
maybe the chapters couldve been a bit longer
but it was good & crazy

it was really good, but it ended at a bad spot and is really short, but I think it's a good story

Hey!

::waves::

I just read this cos it sounded interesting! It was good - you write well so that makes it even better :D

Um, I read your profile page too... no cadbury chocolate? Ah that sucks. So... I take it you move around a lot then? how come, if you don't mind me asking?

~Dreamer xx

if i would like a sequal??!! u must be kiddin...just find a time to do asap ;))...been readin ur stuff and i just love it,the way its written its rather sweet..keep it up :)

A very feel good story indeed. Nice mix of characters to create the correct kinds of tension and playful humour that appeals to the reader.Just signed up myself so if you have the time check out some of my fiction too. =)Nice work on a very entertaining piece ^^

it kinda makes you want to giggle. And smile...alot...i like it.

*cries* That's so... aw! Kawaiiness! XD O.o It was the vanilla all along!! *points at the vanilla scented thingy GASP!* so... in other words.. vanilla can make u DO stuff, huh? Hn... nice... OH OH!! Sequel plz!! *big silly grin* ^_^

O.O.........He... kissed.. him?! I never would've even IMAGINED... I thought Rikki-kun was the one who was gonna... but he was the one that snapped... *giggles* that was so kawaii AND unespected!! ((I guess sinc ei'm here and all... i'll end up reviewing them ALL! WOW!!))

Aww.. hehe.. It would've been funny seeing Kanaye-kun strangle Rikki-kun with the laces then being chased by some fat mall officer... LOL Poor Rikki-kun... I would've killed him off... >.>*Aaww! He's pouting!! O,O forget the poutin! He ended up sleepin in his LAP!! LMAO!

LOL I LOVE Rikki's mum!! XD I'm still here!! Hurray! (i'm gettin annoyin aren't i...? >.>* Gomen...)Xb Yeah... I get a really annoying wake-up call: the Sun Glaring in my face... BLAH!

MUAHAHHA! Screechy fan-school gurls!! EVIL! You really do know what the meaning of evil is! Wow!Aww... Kanaye0kun walked Rikki-kun to the field... aaw... boy wuv ish b shoo kawaii!! X3

YAY! I'm still here! XD >.> .> o.o those evil blue puppy eyes... >.< evil. RUN!! They bite!! LOL Awesome story!! and yeah.. weird... ken... sword... hn...

If I'm able to stay still, I'll review the next one! X3

LOL OHH!! I love it, K-chan!! Just read it and it's awesome!! I'll read the rest and let you know... if i can't read it tonight i'll come back later... umm... really later... OH! I posted.. Gomen, i'll b away for the week.. But it DOES look promising! I'm lookin forward to readin the rest and enjoy it!!

Damn! I ramble too much.. I'm gone now.. *ish gone* POOF!

Woot, this is one of your reviewers on a different account. lol. Was that site you got Kanaye's name from BabyNameWorld or something? I was looking around and I found it too, just to back ya up.

Oh well, you are an awesome author and I can't wait for the sequal!

Wow! That's the end? Well great job Kyande, and yes a sequel should be next!Miss-Nina of the UDA

...that was the end? Then yes, damn it, a sequel is in order (or it will be)! I loved the ending, espcially the very last line, awesome!

Morbid Maxwell-Come to the darkside, we've got yaoi (and thats better than a cookie)!