loving the white and innocence images and you used alliteration...how many times did you complain about mine ;)...i dont know if you should toss aside your demons so frivolously though you have real problems...I admire your ability to express them so artistically...new poem kinda sucks but i think i have an idea...drop an email same addy as ever...fairtheewell Queen CMF

this is frickin sweet! it sounds very well put together and doesn't sound forced, wish i could write like this :) congrats! well done.