This story sounds good, the intro is really catchy, makes you want to read more, udate soon.

~Obsession

Cool. already far better than Disney's version. :) I like it.

This sounds like it has lots of potential! I would love it if you updated!

hi! this sounds interesting... update please? thanks!

I really think you should continue this story; I'm interested in the outcome =D you could pull it off

Please update this story! I'll definitely stick by it if you do =).

~ Aria

Oh gosh! This is so different from the prologues/starts of your other stories. I like it. When i first read the summary, i didn't really like it to be honest, but as soon as i read the first paragraph i really enjoyed it. It's different. In a good way. Unique.

Wow..that was an awesome beginning! Continue soon

lol, a very witty and intriguing beginning. do continue this!

This is really good so far. Add the next chapter soon.

I like the idea of this. Some old version had something about birds pecking out eyes or something but it was too bloody for Disney. *shrugs* Anyway, update as soon as you can because this looks like it is gonna be good. :D

oh wow. this sounds so interesting. i mean... 8 hot guys! (seven "dwarfs" and prince charming). what a lucky girl that serena is.

i really like your twist on the classical fairy tales that everybody loves, but knows isn't true. i mean, seriously, every princess is saved by a kiss from prince charming. oh wow, i'm sure that in real life, as soon as you're kissed, you awaken from the dead, or become queen. sure we do. of course, we still love these tales for some reason, but that's another ramble.this one is soley dedicated upon your prologue.

oh! there's going to be a love traingle! i love love triangles. unless the girl doesn't end up with the guy that i want. then i just get mad. and start rambling. even more than ususal. so... my point. make sure that the guy you're going to make serena end up with... make sure that i like him. please! it'll save you a lot of trouble. and a lot of cursing.

p.s. just in case i forgot to tell you, but i think that i didn't, this is an awesome start!

The only thing I'm curious about is, who's the narrator?

I'll be extremely truthful, I admire those that can look at timeless tales, see all the crap behind them and still bring value to the story. I love this idea of an adaptation, even though I'm not sure exactly where you're going with it, this sounds more than promising and the little prologue definitely hooked me.Double thumbs up, now let's see Serena kick some Disney Snow White butt. I pine for an update, be a dear and indulge us? *grin* ciao

that was so cute! you are so sarcastic much to my relief! i hope you stay with this story and write all of it cuz alot of people just start a story and stop-leaving everyone who wanted to read it in a bind. thanks.