Great Story, an enjoyable read.

I Love The Story :D
Really Awsome
Kept me really entertained.
You are a great writer and I really liked your story and characters.
Jack and Avery Forever.
God I Love Love/Hate Realationshops :p

Hope you keep up the writing :D
Thanks for all the effort you put in, I loved it
:)

i give u a humungous thumbs on this one!

KEEP IT GOING!

Cute story. Very well written I even added it to my favorites!

ending is so cute.:D i enjoyed reading your story so much!!

This story was amazing. It was hilarious, it was romantic, it was great.

I love the guys' personalities, they're really hilarious. And of course Avery's personality, too. I'm glad she sucks at comebacks :P I suck, too.

I loved your ending and I loved the beginning xD

P.S. Aww, I wanted Jack to win at tic tac toe ;P

I know this would have been a good story but i just couldn't get past the chapter where she sleeps with colin out of anger u messed this story up with that part...this shows me what a poor writer you are and I hope one day u'll realize your mistake and revise it but i highly doubt u will. So this story sucked

Great story. It was addictive and brilliant. Keep up the good work!

Aww! This was such a cut and awesome story!

The most amazing thing I've read in a while.

You're a great writer. Keep it up!

I kind of think that Jack and Avery would be a cute couple. i don't know, i feel like she would bring him down to earth.

please review my story (:

This chapter immediately caught my attention. I have this suspicion though that eventually Avery's going to fall for this guy. I already like Michelle's character, she's a lot like one of my friends.

this was really good (:
you should check out my new story too, just in (:

One of my favourite stories on FP. Sure it maybe a little cliche but I adore it. Fantastic characters, all of them were well developed. Interesting disruptions raised in the story and nicely resolved as well.

Avery is a character where you just find her absolutely sweet and has personality. Sure she may suck at comebacks but one of the qualities I like about her. To be honest, at first I found Jack a little annoying. He's one of those hot millionaire arrogant jacka** but deep down he's not at all that bad. He's a great character. Your other characters too were excellent, Brandon, Kayla, Colin, Pete, Jasmine and all the gangs.

My favourite scene from your story is of course the heat scene between Jack and Avery when they were staying in Brandon's place. I love it how you introduced new disruptions by bringing the ex back and Brandon coming back all drunk. Excellent!

So great job, Justice Bana!

i. love. this. chapter.
its so good and Colin is so heroic.
and everybody loves heroes.

OhMyBobb! Hehe i trutlyy lovee this story. You are an amazing writer. seriously one of my many favs.!