i like this, its quite different to anything that I've ever read before.keep it up.

when you get a chance, check out some of my poems. thnx :)

write on,-Em

Hey This is cool...Really realistic and funny in a cynical king of way

Different and good comparsion.

haha, that was great! i loved the sarcasm. keep up the good work!

~XX~

wow, I love it. Very original.