   scorchingray 2005-04-05 . chapter 1this is good. i like the way its written. keep on writing! |
 Niongi 2005-04-04 . chapter 1Thank you, i have to say all poems for friendship i like, i liked this one |
 DamascusDragon 2005-04-04 . chapter 1Woah woah woah. Ashwags is MOVING?! When did this happen?! |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-04-04 . chapter 1AW... ^^ Sweet~~ makes 'me' want to cry... Great job on this!!
keep writing! |
 jellybeanjohnny 2005-04-02 . chapter 1 is ashwags a girl? |
 Sagaciouspnay 2005-04-02 . chapter 1Aw...such a tearful poem to read. I hope you and your Ashwags stay close. I liked the poem very much. I'm sure she/he (really can't tell by Ashwags..) will be delighted to read this. |
 Emmytastic gal 2005-04-02 . chapter 1cool... good job. keep it up. please check out my poems when you get a minute.
write on,-Em |
 hypocrite extrodinare 2005-04-02 . chapter 1love is teh powerful! I get this... its happened to me and my love... but yea... tis lurvely!
~loves from teh lil vampire on the funeral pyre~ |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-02 . chapter 1"Ashwags", very random... or perhaps not to you... Thanks for the review. Nice poem. |
| Wistera 2005-04-02 . chapter 1 Argh. I have this super-strong urge to go explode the whole of North Carolina now. Only I can't think of a way to do it without harming people. And...yeah.
::nod-nod:: I agree with the poem completely. 100% And it' great poem too. ^^
::debates showing poem to mom:: No, she wouldn't like the first few lines... meh. You know my opinion on that. |
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