Sounds truly like the nature of hell. False images, tortures, and mind-rape.

Nice strange band. Seems like where quite a few end up... Then again, I always thought more politicians go to hell than rockers. Still, a crush in hell... That's odd.

Finally saw the update! Creepy lyrics. Perhaps some more depraved stuff as well?

damn, you have some imagination. and you got all these from your DREAMS? then i guess you have horrible nightmares.. but i really like the creativity you put in this story. wonder what happens next? i guess ill juz wait for the next chapter.

the clown was freaky and funny [not in a clown-y way] at the same time.. [moving to next chappie]

the girl with the red teeth was really freaky.. damn it i can imagine her in my head..

whoa this thing is getting freakier and freakier... [moving to next chapter]

Seems like a nice change of pace so far. One possible thing, though. You mention Sir Flop-a-lot Bunny as a 'white bear.'

As a fan of bad jokes myself, that certainly would be a bit better than some of the layers of hell so far. I did like the surreal, deserted cityscape, though. Reminds me of the videogame Silent Hill.

Okay, interesting chapter here. Very surreal with the 'evil twin.' Remind me a bit of 'carnival freakshow' meets were-animals. Expect an email from me.

Afterlife stories are enjoyable and I love the narration in this. Short and sweet. The angst is pouring from each word here.

A nice surreal chapter. This story's pretty good. You seem to be a pretty good writer for your age. Feel free to contact me on AIM.

Hey. I saw you left a review on my sci-fi column. Anyway, this story got my interest. Seems VERY surreal. I had a story along this vein as well, "Hellbound," about a guy in Purgatory attempting to rescue his friend's soul in Hell. I don't know if you ever read it, but Dante's Divine Comedy (particularly Inferno) would be a nice inspiration. Inferno was the loose basis for Hellbound, though it seems you have a nice and messed up setting here so far. Good work!

sad.. and does her boyfriend want to forget her because he really did love her or because he was angry or wut? nice ideas.. were those all from your dreams?those things were creepy.. the two legs and the electric fan spewing blood..freaky..

Cool. Really good chapter. It is freaky though. lol. You discribe stuff in a very vivid and real light. It is nice. I really can't wait to read more.