Wow... wow... wow... I really don't know what to say. This poem is just something I was looking for to read. Seeing through the eyes of a crow. Most people in the world see this bird as a pest, but you were able to bring this bird to a whole nother level of greatness. Great job ^_^

I really like it, the imagery, and the constant use of the crow as the symbol of death, (which it is) black birds meaning any bird colored black have alot of symbol and meaning through out history and so on, and hey who can argue the rock.Good poem, I like the line about the sweet deaths, and tragedies.

Joseph

I love the surreal nature of this piece. It's lovely.

Wow, this really reminded me of something like a folk lore song out a book I was just reading, I mean, it sounds like it could be one in there. It's really beautiful, I love the description. "As he sings out sweet deaths, only the earth wept for." That is a really good line. Nice work!

wow its very lullaby-like, some incredibly powerful and memorising images used. a really delicate yet captivatingly powerful poem.

beautiful piece. profound and touching, wonderfully expressed and nicely conveyed feelings. well written as well, i like this a lot. i like the mysticism and fantastical depths of this piece. great job. :)

Very entrancing and pretty, I liked the ending, it seemed so..dreamlike ^^

very...suspensful, if that's the word I'm looking for. Makes me wonder what the crow can really do and the story flowing is just wonderful. It makes me get goosebumps.

Although I prefer ravens, it feels as if there is something significant in your choice of a crow. It makes it harsher and more gritty. I like. ^-^

that was deep

Gah, too lazy to sign in, but yes IT'S ME! YAY! AT LONG LAST...SHE *REVIEWS*! Ahem. Anyway, I liked this poem, you're putting lots of good descriptions into it. It didn't really sound like you, though. I don't know why, because yeah, you'd definately write about something like this but this didn't sound like you. Compliment? Perhaps...it was odd. Anyway, I agree with Rem (yes, I read her review...I have no life T_T) that you should use a raven instead of a crow. So much prettier! ... Though they're really similar, I'm sure there's a difference! ^_^;;Yoo-jin

Yo, Koe - wazzup? You're getting really good at using adjectives and imagery! Ew - but a crow sounds kind of gross and...tone-deaf. How about a raven? Like Edgar Allan Poe's bird of sorrow? Anyway - good work!