Very scary poem.

I really like the rythm seen in the poem, I thought it was very deep in detail about the horrors of being abused, the ending was amazing, i really thought you took it home with that last line about how "The only way to stop the rage… is to stop yourself" very true indeed. Great work on the poem, i look foward to reading more... peace.

reminds me of some movie. forgot which. but this is pain filled. rage. blind hate.i like it.i really like how you write. its great.

interesting and really good

The poem sounds like something I would write, but never be able to show to anyone...it's very deep. I ike the way you write.

Wow, powerful! And the last line is so poignant. Well done.

hm...interesting. I'm not sure what to say about this. The beginning has a good theme though.

FRIGHTENING YET INCREDIBLY TOUCHING. I definately like it...*_*

hm. Powerful stuff. Well written poem. These people you're writting about, I want to give them all a big hug.

How you say the only way to stop the rage is to stop yourself, I respect that, but I could never follow it. I'll never become what became of the man who hurt me. I could never imagine doing it, it just sickens me. But this, this speaks more truth than most will ever know. Excellent.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

so sad...wonderfully written though

Fantastic!! I really liked this!!

wow last part was even more depressing than the rest, and the rest was incredibly sad. i feel sorry for the narrator, no one deserves that.

I. LOVE. IT. Great work! "The only way to stop the rage… is to stop yourself" I love that part! WOW I am speechless! Great job =)

Very powerful, I can relate to it with bully problems in elementary school and orally abusive teachers in high school who always looked down on me and my work. Keep up the great writings!