I gotta say, I think it's foolish to write that your story sucks, because it really doesn't..
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Aww... Such a sweet and serene kind of writing. It's good for a twelve-year-old. *nod nod*

It didn't suck at all. (It was quite good for a 12 year old!) It spoke to me deeply; I am much like Kay.

This does not suck! It reminds me of what I do sometimes when I want to be alone...but since I've never had a love or have loved, I don't watch guys in the park either, but I always have my composition note book handy! I don't draw too hot either...but good job! The description and angst is very powerful...kudos! Just wanted to say that a new chappy of Out of the Rain is up!

i really like this.It really good.and you wrote it at twelve?thats impressive.well good job.

Good ending. wow. you wrote this when you were twelve. wow. thats damn good. there are somethings to be improved, ...but ...12 ...wow. ok i'll just say stuff i thought you could do to improve it. i) clarify what age they are. because i couldn't really visualise them too well.ii) Clarify where they are. ie it doesnt work well saying that she's sitting on the library stairs, because you may know what your visualising but we don't. also I never knew where this guy was going, why stone steps? where is he going every day? is it a job and if so why doesn't she have one?i) keep the same tone. as a 3rd person narrator, you can't change how you talk because it changes the feel of the story. this is the main reason why i like the first halve more than the second. finally, the description in this is basically...amazing. writing like this, if you wrote a book, i'd buy it. (taking into account the fact that by now you've improved on all the stuff ive mentioned). from looking at your stories and their length, you could definitly write a book, and the way you write it would be a good one too. keep writing (and living). ALsomeday