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| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-12 ch 5,   | Don't worry... These words... You cannot be anything but true and beautiful. ;) |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-12 ch 4, | It has a 'stream of consciousness' effect. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-12 ch 3, | You convey this carelessness about life in the wake of true passion. |
| Suicidal Skies 2005-05-08 ch 5, | Lovely. It seems to all connect with in each other. Keep up the goodness |
| Suicidal Skies 2005-05-08 ch 2, | ...Against, lovely. It's so pretty. |
| Suicidal Skies 2005-05-08 ch 1, | Lovely. OO Just lovely |
| method acting 2005-04-27 ch 2, | beautiful. one of your bests |
| Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style 2005-04-25 ch 5, | Some awesome descriptions in here. I love the imagery, it's really good. The line "strong enough to box the fear away" really stands out to me for some reason. Good job. |
| Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style 2005-04-25 ch 4, | Yeah, you do kind of fall apart there at the end. Try just writing something new from the second "go! Stop haunting me!" line. It's right around there that you start wandering away. |
| Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style 2005-04-25 ch 3, | Aw. |
| Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style 2005-04-25 ch 2, | This one's better. It's very beautiful:) |
| Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style 2005-04-25 ch 1, | Very descriptive. You try a little too hard, but you have beautiful wording, so... it balances out. |
| Infection 2005-04-21 ch 1, | This was superb loved the quality of it. |
| inferno tempest 2005-04-21 ch 1, | it was superb! |
| aknightsgoldenrose 2005-04-16 ch 5, | Nice collection of poems. I think my fav one would have to be the second one. |