Whoa this is alot of drama man I wonder who is she going to go with.. Great story fist time reader

Well...presonally...I think you need to update NOW damnit! *Sweet smile.* Please? I'll be forever grateful. XD I like it. please hurry up.

Hay grrl gr8t story u have her. I'm luvin' it please write mo. I'll B waiting.

woo hoo... This is an amazing story. i can't wait to find out who the liar is.. You better update or I will have to do some major butt kicking...

Hey, sorry I didn't review sooner but I was very busy. I like the story a lot. I see it going places. Your style of writing is very unique and I love it! I can't wait to hear more! Update soon! I'll try to review sooner next time! ;)

ah! Don't stop there! I am about to die!update, or...tee hee

-Delanie

Very good, just try to break up the dialouge a bit. You had some enourmous chunks that were a struggle to read. But, that could because of the uploading.

Update soon! I will keep in touch.By the way, I like how you seem to seperate yourself from Anne Rice. Very nice. I hate people who try to play off her books.

Sincerely, delanie

Loved it. More, please!

wow...please update soon!! i like it alot=)

I love this story! It's so intruiging. The details again were absolutely amazing. I love reading what you write, it's fantastic. I hope you update this story soon, I can't wait to read what happens next! :)

That was awesome! You had me captivated! I love you're style of writing... it's very sophisticated. The way you described each of the characters was magnificent - I could actually see them standing before me. You're very good with the details which enhance a strong story. I really really like where this is going and I hope you continue it soon! Good job and keep up the great work!