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| thenewromantic 2005-04-07 ch 1, | Wow...this is hauntingly beautiful. For me, every line has a meaning. It's really not 'awfully terrible' - I love it! My only *constructive cricism* is that I think this would do really well as a poem, but then the structure is really good as it is now...anyway, well done! This is great! ^^ PS. Thanks for reviewing my song! PSS. I love the little verse at the end of your profile - did you write it? Just wondering |
| roselilie 2005-04-05 ch 1, | Wow great poem. Its very orignal. I'm actually speechless. Though I can say that I'm the same way. Keep it up! |
| KyranHayyt 2005-04-02 ch 1, | i love the concept, its very creative. are you going to turn it into a full lenght story, or keep it as such? im very interested to see what you do with this, its to good an idea to waste |