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| Rawk-Chick 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI saw that you reviewed one of my poems, so I thought, hey, why not. I finally got around to reading this one... I'm sure understand the meaning of this poem, but you have good writing skills. I like it. |
| simpleplan13 2005-05-20 ch 4, | abuseso true |
| Lucid Nonsense 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. It's a pretty cool idea, you should do more of this type |
| simpleplan13 2005-05-12 ch 3, | abusei thought you used multiple words in one poem, but still tahnks! nice poem |
| simpleplan13 2005-05-04 ch 2, | abuseawesome...I loved the ending & the pinball metaphor thing... you should list the words at the end.. id liek to try to do it |
| swtdreamz101 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseo while the thunder shows its appreciation by greeting the storm, how awesum, nice poem |
| youzi 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is a fantastic piece...loved how you described the whole thing...not very sure what it was about though...some rainstorm/hurricane/hahahaha no idea what thing...oops...and not very sure what you;re talking about in your summary either!..but i loved 'The tempest now a Harlequin dancer Flowing and flourishing In a swirl of diamond patterns'...just wonderful...excellent job =D |