|Reviews for Mobius of Thought|
| patinarbo 5/20/05 . chapter 1
Grade64- I love the visual imagery. It also has a nice rhythm throughout.
| youzi 4/2/05 . chapter 1
very interesting. Loved your strength of imagiantion considering that the piece is not yet in existence! Like the lines 'Stone or metal, thought of form,the twisted ring cannot be worn..' nice rhyme to the whole piece as well. Great job D
| swtdreamz101 4/2/05 . chapter 1
oo interesting, very poetic, nice poem ;D