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| Lurking-Shadow 2005-07-24 ch 1,   | this was well-written. Many things were interestingly described, like "a troublesome, tormenting crush" One thing I didn't like about it was that "all of me" was repeated too many times. I know it's the title, but still, it felt rather redundent. |
| Mistress of Eternity 2005-05-03 ch 1, | This is truly a masterpiece! 8stands up and claps* O.. well done, well done! Beautiful yet so simple, the rhythm and rhyming flows so naturally! Pure talent :) ROCK ON!! Love, ~Anna |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-04-06 ch 1, | "illiterate love" I loved that. this was really good. cheers on a nice piece. |