Hey. This was really interesting. I found a few grammar issues:

It happened to quickly to do much--the first "to" should be too

I had had a concusion--concusion is concussion

I doubt you regularily-- should be regularly.

Otherwise, it was slightly sad, just like you said. Maybe more full of remorse than anything. The serial killer part was interesting- it surprised me that one family could have so many tragic deaths. The ending was good, it summed up the peice nicely and fit the mood. I liked it, and the irony with the Tv was cool.

*laughs* Hahaha, sounds like a typical (dead) teenager...

Bravo! ^^

I don't even know what to say, but that I really really liked this. You have talent *sniffles* I LOVE YOU MORE THAN REASON SHOULD ALLOW *cough* Ok, got that over with *skips away happily*

Wow, these kind of storys make me afraide to die. Nothigness? I can live with. Going to hell? I can live with. Heaven? I would love to. Reincarnation? Wonderful. The thing that scares me is having to see everything. It's even scarier not being able to hear anything. Nice story, but in a way, it's depressing.

[OFFTOPIC: Ohh. Wow, I'm flattered. Really. Thanks for your kind comments. Well appreciated, story was one of my first ventures into writing the genre. O.o

Also, I'm not sure whether I've ever signed in reviewing your stories, so; to clarify, I'm fbarlolken.]

Anyway. This was very good. It fit almost perfectly into the genres you selected.

I was so sad for him, because those in 'real' life never fade. They stay until the end of forever, until a spirit walker sees and helps them...?

[This probably wasn't intended to be too realistic, but since I am at least 1/4 native of Taiwan... the way this works from this version;

When you have spontaneous shudders, some believe it is because a ghost has touched you. Like when you're walking through a busy street, and you bump shoulders with the person next to you. And when they needs your help, you feel their presence in your dreams. They supposed just occupy the other end of life, like radio frequency. Ultraviolet as opposed to infrared.]

OK. I'm finished... for now. Haha. Hopefully reading all of that didn't take up too much time. >.<

Again, very good story, and thanks for the review.

*smile* the first descriptive word that comes to mind is "quirky", my friend. I like it though. The confused ghost. Maybe this could turn into a series or something; whenever the spirit (no pun intended...*dodges thrown produce*) moves you to comment on something in life, you could say it through your ghost character. What would the ghost say about the War in Iraq? Summer vacation? The outbreak of some huge pandemic? You see what I mean. Just a thought. Hope your writer's block goes away soon!