Very well written. I love your tone. I think a lot of teenage girls can relate to this, at least I can, and I know exactly what you mean by hate and love at the same time.

I've reviewed this once in Writer'sBlock, but I'll review here too!

I really like how you delicately describe how pretty and fortunate these girls are, but at the same time, gently condemned their actions. The first line is awesome, and I really like the butterfly line too. I can see the author looking down on almost a colony of ants, only the ants are really these girls. Very nice.

This is really good, and well written!