*holds tomato in hand* You better be damn sorry! *throws another tomato* You killed Blit! You killed Blit! I want my Blit back! *starts crying*

Ake: This chapter was...really random...

Haku: Not as random as Danzaiver?

Ake: *Shrugs* All right, I take it back. Seriously though, no one has ever asked for my opinion before...nor mentioned me as much as you have...*sniffs* thank you. Just for that I will give you my opinion. I like the Yuki/Rai pairing. They seem to have a little bit more foundation than the Yuki/Blit pairing. Doesn't mean I wouldn't mind seeing it though...I wish Blit were mine! *grabs Blit squeezing him* mine mine mine!

Haku: While my creator is busy squeezing the dear life out of your character, may I present to you a small mistake in your work? No? Too bad..."WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH YOU JERKS! I’M A GUY! A GUY! SO WHY DO YOU KEEP CALLING ME A FEMALE! I AM WELL AWARE HOW FEMININE I LOOK! BUT I’M A GIRL! A GIRL!" Do you mean I'm not a girl or I'm a boy, a boy?

Chibi-Ake's killer siggy! "You are my 90 review!"

chocolate pecan pie...just like mom used to make...untill the accident lol

i like this story! next time you write can you send me the rest via internet? i can't get on this website again, sorry. i love the story line though. it's very interesting and intriguing. it's fun to read also. it keeps me, the reader, coming back for more. i read all four chapters in 30 minutes. it was fun.

Allergic to something...yeah right *eyes twitches* no excuses! Is Blit still gonna be in the story? He's become a favourite of mine...please?

O_O...okay please explain to me the TM thing on the End of the World please? Other than that, this reminds me of a Dungeons and Dragon roleplay I had when I was a schizophreniac elf...

Well shounen-ai...never a big fan of it but...my muses demands me to broaden my horizons...(Haku: Damn straight! Yumi: Get to it! We're screaming fangirls buried in the back of your brain!) *twitches a little* Okay time for the review! This is the second time I've been mentioned about helping people s I'm happy! You've definently gotten the idea of seperating your paragraphs (I personally use the line bar thingy) and I've got a prediction on this story...the pink moon thingy makes everyone giggle like a schoolgirl? Teeheehee! nvm. On a sidenote, one thing not to do is put author notes in the middle of the story, horrible! O_O *gags* I still have my eye on you...

The Ultimate siggy! "I've got multiples of 2!" my sister during a random game of 31.

You may want to try to to seperate the paragraphs so that we know which time is what. You jumped around there a little too much. Try reading one of mine or some of the favourite stories on my profile for good ideas. I'm keeping an eye on you...

i really liked it. I wrote my first original fic earlier. Here's the link. http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1875759 I hope you like it. So... Read and review.