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| Ash of The Wind 2007-06-30 ch 14,   | Man, long time no read. When are you gonna continue with Pink Rose? I thought my stories had a long hiatus period. We've got to talk again too. I'll try and email you sometime. |
| Windgirl 2007-01-03 ch 14, | Damn, everything about this was random huh? Ha! Well, I'll tell you the ending was somewhat funny but the beginning...Somewhat rushed. I mean it would have been nice to stretch this out just a little more. This to me hardly seems like an episode (I'm comparing it to anime episodes) More like an excerpt anime-wise if you ask me. I just woke up and had breakfast, if I sound a little mean blame the fact my mother woke me up. But anyways, the length isn't that important. The chapter itself is fine, you kind of made Lei like Jet Li from Unleashed, except he didn't kill them XD. So it's just fine! ^-^ |
| Ash of The Wind 2006-12-23 ch 13, | I'm a week or two late with reading this chapter but I always get around to it no matter how late I am. I really love learning about characters in any type of story and you've been doing that alot lately. I'm looking forward to reading the future chapters and finding out what Lei has got in mind. |
| Ash of The Wind 2006-12-09 ch 12, | Its nice to finally see Pink Rose up and active again. And at least now I know what went on with the affair and where Kazi-kun came from. |
| White Fox 2006-12-06 ch 6, | I think the little mini-fight in episode 6 was cool^^ |
| Windgirl 2006-12-05 ch 13, | Well...hmm. I got one thing to say! You sound like some freaking hypnotist on the second to last line O.O lmao, just kidding. But really, at first I thought the beginning was somewhat rushed. It could have been a little longer. But anyways, it then flowed on later. The last line of the chapter was blunt really ^^. I liked it so far. And...I think your phone is dead since I'm writing this around almost 8 my time. Either way. I just hope you're okay. ^^ I'll be alright, I hope I get to talk to you tomorrow if you're not going to call. |
| Windgirl 2006-12-03 ch 12, | Sweet, awesome! Actually the flashback was pretty good, I liked it since it feels like a necessity there. Oh hey look...I'm the 100th reviewer o.o yay!! We!! ^^Lmao, her profile "Dislikes: Kazuma" that was funny XD |
| Neko Septh 2006-12-01 ch 12, | good good i liked the hole thing keep writing |
| White Fox 2006-11-29 ch 5, | *thumbs up* |
| White Fox 2006-11-26 ch 4, | this chapter turned out to be short too. they're not all going to be this length are they? guess I'll find out. |
| White Fox 2006-11-26 ch 3, | I think this chapter would have been better if it were longer. It was good but too short. |
| White Fox 2006-11-21 ch 2, | this is a good chapter. it keeps you wondering what will happen in future chapters. |
| White Fox 2006-11-21 ch 1, | *thumbs up* you gave plenty of information and it was easy to read. Although like this its easier to forget where I was if I had to leave and go do something but thats no big deal. |
| Tracy 2006-11-13 ch 1, | That was a really good story i really liked it i am looking forward to seeing the end |
| Sakura 2006-06-18 ch 11, | i like it. The reason why is because Kimiko is really kinda cool. Also can tell she is a good friend. |