Am i getting annoying yet in england we don't have Euro's we have pounds! I do like the story though I'm just picking out the little mistakes

Don't get me wrong coz i do like this story but I'm going to be a pain again surely she'll be rubbish at history at this school because its in Britain and she won't know any of it. Because as far as I know you don't learn the entire English history coz i remember having to teach my friend from america what 1066 was which any school child in England knows straight away.

o I like it so far and gonna carry on reading but just thought I'd be a pain and point out that Cathedrals in England aren't Catholic. I don't know about all of them but I'm pretty sure the majority are Church of England because they all became that way after the reformantion. don't worry I'l stop before I go into the history but yeah Cathedral would most likely be church of England which is more similar to Baptist than Catholic.

She's right! Five foot five is NOT short! LOL. I love this. OMG, Boarding School! I would die! LOL. I love it!

Could you read my story? It's called: Famous.

*applauds for Kythia* I ammend your wonderful writing skills and the fact that you UPDATED! *jumps around room shouting HOORAY!* while I do understand that things get in the way of writing please UPDATE again soon!

Its getting more and more interessting!! I hope you have enough time to do the 50 page paper and 7 page paper! Maybe next chapter is when they maybe get a little more intimate? You decide.

ok so hes an angel. lol, angles have email? thats interestingcrystal-ice

imaginary.. i think so, he knows her inner thoughts, he knows tht alec's a good guy w/out ever having met him personaly

crystal-ice

... Is samuel real, is she imagining this guy? He's really confusing me, first off because I'm sorry, but what 9 or 10 year old (probably about 90 lbs) can just casually catch a 4 year old (probably about 50 lbs) from an admitedly 6-8 ft fall, that is just physically impossible, unless he saved her by cushioning her fall by her falling on top of him. Also, how is it tht he's allways around, like suposedly even before tht incident he saved her from crawling into the street... how is he always around, is he a family friend? Also its kinda hard to believe that someone, even a best friend, even a boyfriend for tht matter (although u said it was platonic) would cross an ocean on an hours long flight to say hello and take a 10 minute walk... anyway this all just kind of makes me think tht this guy is in her head, kind of the literal epitome of 'too good to be true'

crystal-ice

So, basically now that I've read your whole story if you don't update I will slap you! yay!

OH MY FREAKING GOSH! she-she-she UPDATED! *stares in utter disbelief at her computer screen* OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH (and if you kill off a character I shall have to hurt you. severely.)

yea, um, definately didnt know you updated. no alerts. no idea why. anyways, tis good, tis good. yay!

aloofness. hehe fun word. aloofness.

yea, anyways. yay!

hehenice xDD

Nice little chappy. good introduction of Alec's parents. Perhaps maybe you could bring in that other girl again? (sorry I forgot her name), the the slutty one who wants Alec. She adds drama. P.S I am going to try to update my story too. I wrote almost an entire chapter before i realized that i hated it and also the previous one i posted, so i'm scrapping both and doing some serious revisions

MAN! what was the 50 page paper on? i wish i could write a 50 page paper... anyway...like i said...it seems very robotic and perfect, but that's ok. I like it. I gotta go. Please! Update! Rachel will kill me if you don't. I gotta go. Cya!