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| Kax 2006-07-17 ch 19,   | Don't worry about it. I stay up all the time! I can't wait 'till the next chapter. I don't usually read unfinished stories, but you've convinced me to do it more often. |
| sillysocks 2006-07-15 ch 19, | haha! i remember talking about the first couple of lines during lunch!! and i remember it being such a funny conversation! i really liked this chapter. well written? it was long, but thats good! thanks for updating it makes me happy! i inspire you-question mark? question mark? |
| Kax 2006-07-04 ch 18, | Kya! I absolutely love this story! (Extra !s) I read it straight through starting last night and now the sun has come up. I admit, at first I was afraid I wouldn't like Caden, but now I love him! Doot doot, song for you! (Hyper from sleep deprivation) |
| Nickel 2006-06-03 ch 17, | Kendra if you need an editor I can do it. I'll actually notice things like "it was really nice to get the over with, but it didn't relieve me as much as I was hoping for" I mean come on Kendra I would've thought you could notice something like that! But I do like it. |
| Purple Battery 2006-05-13 ch 18, | ok... fine... tas hasn't quite kissed everyone... but she's close to having kissed everyone! anyway, im glad that she's finally admitted she likes him! YAY! caden likes her, he wasnts to hug her, he wants to kiss her! |
| sillysocks 2006-04-30 ch 18, | chapter 18=wow! enuff said |
| Serbgrl 2006-04-27 ch 1, | Good story keep writing |
| Mehras 2006-04-25 ch 18, | Really enjoying your story and how the characters act. Now just hurry up and update again so I can keep reading :D |
| j.m.burford 2006-04-24 ch 18, | You are welcome. This story, although has some errors in age/ maturity has many good points. It adresses topics which can be familiarised with many teenag girls and has a good structure by which the story is delivered to the reader.Keep up with it as you continue to developed your writing skills as a good author. |
| j.m.burford 2006-04-21 ch 17, | looking foward to the following chapters. Still think that characters are a little too young for all the events and the way the character thinks... A bit unbelievable when they are like on 13.. How old are they again? because they seem way older.. maybe that is just what teenagers are like over in America |
| j.m.burford 2006-04-21 ch 1, | well, so far so good... I hope that I do not continue reading about the character in year eight and that she ismuch older in future chapters... |
| Purple Battery 2006-04-09 ch 17, | they were all cozy! haha! and she admits she was kinda cozy, so its all good! now for the kiss, i mean... she's kissed everyone else! now its caden's turn! |
| buwinky 2006-03-12 ch 16, | That was so cute. She is getting closer to Caden! You need to update soon, I want to see what's going to happen to those two soon! |
| buwinky 2006-03-12 ch 15, | Wow, Bree kissed Tas. She just confessed, I think she's quite the fast mover there! |
| buwinky 2006-03-12 ch 14, | I like how you related the title of your story into the chapter, very clever! I also like how Caden doesn't think much of the whole ordeal |