Wow this is jale if you do not know that is really good i like it.

I love this one, its very visual and has great flow, thing is you'd never be that girl

wow. can honestly relate.awesomeI know, I know my review is lame b/c I don't have the intellect to express how awesomely great this is

Greetings... In my review/opinion, I believe that this is very similar to your Two-Dimensional poem. This is the antithesis, actually. The character is stuck on an extreme. Either at one end or the other: just like the two-dimensional person. What a great poem!

Aww... I like this. My favorite line: "I don't want to be the girl poisoned by her own potential." Also, the end is shocking, but really good. I don't have any comments to provide a "well-rounded" critique, as the little review box says I should. This is too good to need help!

This is going on my favorites. Keep writing,

TTM