I liked it...you shouldn't be so quick to judge your work...good job!Care

first of all, i detected one major problem w/ this: lack of self-confidence (in the summary, i mean). never say to the readers to "not read it cuz it sucks." sell it and put confidence in your work and people will like it more when you aren't putting yourself the way, I thought it was very witty and cute. I liked it a lot!

Heartfelt and honest, these are really words to live by. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.