Wow. Maybe building a cold stone fortress around your heart aint so good. Well, it can be. Great poem, definitely write more.

Absolutely. Amazing. I REALLY enjoyed reading this. It'll be on my favorites list in a blink. Only -tiny- thing: maybe "cries" should have been "crying" in the second-to-last line?

Keep up the stunning work,

TTM

Great work here. Wonderful job, keep it up.