Awe, this update was so cute. I love these two and hope it ends well. This story is well written.

I finally decided to read this story after overlooking it for quite a while. I'm so glad I decided to give it a chance. Aside from the grammar issues and use of modern slang in the dialogue, the story itself isn't bad. And despite how Cameron came to be with Jordan, I'm glad she didn't marry that perverted old man JD. Just the thought of it turned my stomach! I feel sorry for her aunt Bell; she's going to miss out on the only family she has because of the stance she's chosen to take. It's a shame that Cameron has been forced to leave her friends and the support they offered, but hopefully she'll make lasting friendships during her time in London. I'm just hoping that the upcoming masquerade doesn't turn into the fiasco it has the potential to become.

Have you managed to find a beta reader for this story?

I just finished reading the story, so this is my first review and I will attempt review every chapter from here on. The story started really slow, and I almost quit, but I was interested in the out come. I could have easily skipped to the last few chapters, but with each new chapter you improved the tale and the characters. Cameron is a delightful character, who's wise beyond her years, were as Jordan really needs to grow up more. I'm not sure how much research you did for this story, but I was under the impression that Cameron is to far along to attend balls or any even that doesn't involve close family and friends. However, I could be wrong, since I mostly read the Regency period.

You are a good romantic writer, and as someone who Loves HR, I felt that you captured the genre quite nicely. I don't really have any ideas on where the story should go, but if you feel blocked you step away from it for a bit. The muse does not like to forced, and she can turn on you real quick, and you won't be happy with anything that you've written. Also, ask you self where is the story going and what do you need to do as a writer to make it move forward and not stall. I recommend listening to music and reading some HR, I think both may help you defeat the dreaded writer block.

I look forward to your next update, and remember to breathe, it will come when it's ready. :D

Cholyn

I'm glad that you have been updating:) I love the direction the story is going in. I can't wait to read more!

Thankfully Monique is a kind soul and was able to provide a gorgeous dress for Cameron...she will be the envy of all the dim-witted females who will be in attendance at the ball...great update!! But I'm anxiously awaiting the day when Jordan confesses his undying love for Cameron and apologizes to her for his earlier treatment of her...

wonderful update! I can't wait for her to be introduced into London's society but more than anything I can't wait for her to have this baby which I hope will be a delightful mixture of the two of them. Above all else, I can't wait for him to tell her how much he loves her and ask for her forgiveness when he lost his ** mind...

Can Jordan freakin realize he loves her already!? AND he still hasn't apologized for calling her those vicious names...** & harlot. He should be so ashamed of himself. Let the past go already buddy!

I freakin LOVE this update! Jordan is SO IN LOVE but too afraid to admit it. He was a sworn bachelor to NEVER marry again but here he is about to abduct Cameron and make her marry him! Wonders never cease and I'm ecstatic about it! Cameron deserves all that and MORE!

Damn this is a GREAT story!! I can't wait to read more! Bravo,Bravo...I simply love historical IR of BW/WM!

Poor, poor Cameron! Her friends have been complete idiots and her Aunt should be pimp-slapped! She has treated her so horribly. I can't wait for Jordan to see her fro the wonderfully loving person she is...Great story!! Please update soon and finish this story with a wonderfully happy ending!

This update is really cute. I absolutely love historical fiction romances especially those set in England. There an elegance and sophistication that is no longer seen in romance. The fact that you added culture is awesome. Please update soon. Cannot wait.

Yeah! An update - thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

i'm happy you decided to update it's been so long "lol",cameron and jordan look so good togethe.hope you'll update soon

I love this story!

Good story, but the formatting needs to be fixed. Heavy editing needs to happen too! It must have been hard starting up the story again after being away/not thinking about it for so long, so kudos for trying.