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| poetic abortion 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abusethis can be taken in so many different ways. beautiful imagery and amazing use of words. *swoons* this was so beautiful, such a breath taking and lovely peice. *steals your talet and runs* !~* noelle *~! |
| sirius chatham 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's just...amazing. Absolutely beautiful; perfection, almost. definently on my favorites list. You're not by chance a white stripes fan, are you? Their colors are basically red and black (and white). Yeah, incredible poem. I love the ancient musical images. sirius chatham |
| negligible fictional force 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abusegoodness. you take perfectly plain colours and transform into fairy queens. i am transfixed. though i can still type. -kismet. |
| Cyssel 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseahh. intriguing read. so beautiful. favouriting this story. |
| linaeve 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abusewhoa. just. your imagery... made me keel over and, really, stare and blink. beautiful, heartbreakingly lovely-- brilliantly done. |
| rialle 2005-04-08 ch 1, anon. | abusedance, my lady, danceis it this one? :) anyway. this is enchanting. |
| Noir Fleurir 2005-04-07 ch 1, | abusenice flowing poem. Like it. |
| Darkhymns 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseO.o This has great imagery, it was beautiful and dark. Great! |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseyour poem is absolutely fantastic (the a/n—i'd dump, like you'd dump a lie.) |
| smile persephone 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis can be interpreted in so many ways! I really love this about the poem. 'dance, my lady, dance' is my favorite line! Nicely done! |
| amphiboly 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseit's lovely darling. it flows really well and it's so you. ((: |
| Yamagata 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuse**'n. |
| The tribes tale 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abusewonderful imagrey in a wonderful poem |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, I love the abstractness that flows freely from your verses. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |