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poetic abortion
2005-05-30
ch 1,
abusethis can be taken in so many different ways. beautiful imagery and amazing use of words. *swoons* this was so beautiful, such a breath taking and lovely peice. *steals your talet and runs*

!~* noelle *~!
sirius chatham
2005-04-28
ch 1,
abuseWow. That's just...amazing. Absolutely beautiful; perfection, almost. definently on my favorites list.

You're not by chance a white stripes fan, are you? Their colors are basically red and black (and white).

Yeah, incredible poem. I love the ancient musical images.

sirius chatham
negligible fictional force
2005-04-25
ch 1,
abusegoodness. you take perfectly plain colours and transform into fairy queens. i am transfixed. though i can still type. -kismet.
Cyssel
2005-04-09
ch 1,
abuseahh. intriguing read. so beautiful. favouriting this story.
linaeve
2005-04-08
ch 1,
abusewhoa.

just.

your imagery... made me keel over and, really, stare and blink. beautiful, heartbreakingly lovely-- brilliantly done.
rialle
2005-04-08
ch 1, anon.
abusedance, my lady, danceis it this one? :)

anyway. this is enchanting.
Noir Fleurir
2005-04-07
ch 1,
abusenice flowing poem. Like it.
Darkhymns
2005-04-04
ch 1,
abuseO.o This has great imagery, it was beautiful and dark. Great!
Manuel Fajar
2005-04-03
ch 1,
abuseyour poem is absolutely fantastic (the a/n—i'd dump, like you'd dump a lie.)
smile persephone
2005-04-03
ch 1,
abuseThis can be interpreted in so many ways! I really love this about the poem. 'dance, my lady, dance' is my favorite line! Nicely done!
amphiboly
2005-04-02
ch 1,
abuseit's lovely darling. it flows really well and it's so you. ((:
Yamagata
2005-04-02
ch 1,
abuse**'n.
The tribes tale
2005-04-02
ch 1,
abusewonderful imagrey in a wonderful poem
Faithless Juliet
2005-04-02
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant, I love the abstractness that flows freely from your verses. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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