"What is not meant to be, will not happen regardless of how much you want it." If you can pick up something, you have to be able to let it down.

Wow, this is powerful, snd although the poems you r writing r ver valuable u need to move on if she has left you. if u r not worth the time 2 her then don't waste what time u have. sorry don't mean to sond rude.

gee, i wonder if anyone will flame my sadam poem? no one has flamed me yet!

keep up with the good work!

I think we all think others look at us like this. Amazes me...sort of that sinking feeling that seeps into us when someone brushes us off. But anyways. I really love this. The whole repitition seemed to work wonderful. Almost like a song...a chant almost. Good piece.

Wow, that's really powerful, and the repetition works well.

Quite saddening and depressing.

Wow, powerful peice. Dusty, I can remember how I felt when I broke up with the person I loved...omg, this I can SO relate to. Thank you for writing such a powerful piece!Amy*AKARootbeerFloat

Very neat... I like! Lots!