That was kinda beautiful.:)

Sad, though... but I am a sucker for tragic poetry. I loved your choice of words, it painted a nice picture (an expression I use entirely too much, haha).

Reminded me of an Evanescence song for some reason. Hmm...

Amazing writing. Great job altogether!

That was beautiful...

wow...really powerful and symbolic, i like the end. keep writing.

Oh this is sad, but brillently written! I loved it!

Thankyou for the review

Eliza

Whoa.. Awesome poem, btw thanks for reviewing.. This is the second one I've read.. You write great, I'mma read and review them all!...Later.. >.>;;

I could see these as song lyrics...This is awsome, you've got talent..love the imagery ^_^ Keep it up.--pammy-

the repition works beautifully here .. im looking forward to reading more from you

Powerful, moving, and enlightening as well. Very good piece in my opinion, well done.

wow... cool poem.. a different kind from what i'm used to reading.. very good.!! good job! :)

Not every rose has thorns. Some are like bred not to have thorns.

GOOD WORK!

i absolutely loved the personification in this piece. the imagery here was fabulous. keep up the great work =0)

Wow, this is amazing. I love the rose motif, and its subsequent personification. Very beautiful.