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| A. Hankins 2005-04-25 ch 3,  | abuseOh my god! I feel as thought your taking pages out of my old diary from highschool! My parents think I'm wierd for listening to Utada Hikaru and Boa, and Ayu... but luckily my friends were as wierd as I was. Please continue writing, I really wanna know what's gonna happen! |
| KELLY4SVS 2005-04-06 ch 3, | abusesounds good i'll wait for 'the good stuff' before i write an indepth review ^_^ |
| wrambler 2005-04-05 ch 3, | abusethis is good. the plot is interesting. it could be better written though. there are a LOT of grammatical errors especially with verb tenses. like tons. |
| Black Butterfli 2005-04-04 ch 2, | abuseLiking this. I liked the dialogue and details. Update soon. |
| KELLY4SVS 2005-04-04 ch 2, | abusesounds like her 'true' self is a geek... seems good so far keep going. |
| Blonde Babi 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abusei reely like this tsory i think u r an excellent writer. nbe sure to check out mylatest stpry "jersey" keep up the good work! |
| KELLY4SVS 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseits good but there are a few bits i dont get... if you're american then its understandable...(i'm british) but overall its good |