Well I hope you come back to this story would like see if she ever gets to be her true self and gets to meet that guy he sounds yummy

Luv it.XD.

Well I'm sticking with what I said last, it's a cute story. Could be a bit better written but that will come I hope. I like J-Pop so that's a cool, weird little thing to have in here.

I'll keep reading.

Peace

Well, I don't know if this story is complete or what, but it needs some work - if it's still going on, that is. The grammar is a bit "everywhere" but it's only a second chapter. I suggest a Beta. We all need one of those anyway.

Peace&Love

Oh my god! I feel as thought your taking pages out of my old diary from highschool! My parents think I'm wierd for listening to Utada Hikaru and Boa, and Ayu... but luckily my friends were as wierd as I was. Please continue writing, I really wanna know what's gonna happen!

sounds good i'll wait for 'the good stuff' before i write an indepth review ^_^

this is good. the plot is interesting. it could be better written though. there are a LOT of grammatical errors especially with verb tenses. like tons.

Liking this. I liked the dialogue and details. Update soon.

sounds like her 'true' self is a geek... seems good so far keep going.

i reely like this tsory i think u r an excellent writer. nbe sure to check out mylatest stpry "jersey" keep up the good work!

its good but there are a few bits i dont get... if you're american then its understandable...(i'm british) but overall its good