I love this story so much, its really sweet. I have to admit i understand about 2 percent of the references only but i still love it, its a beautiful story, so much that this is my second or third time reading :D

ive read this story ages ago and i have recently become obsessed with morrissey and i remembered i read a story where the guy had morrisseys hair... so ive been searching for this story for a week coz i couldnt remember the author!im so glad i found it... i loved it even more the second time

I love this story. I decided to reread it again years later because it still rocks. I can't believe I still haven't read BTB. I meant to read it and ended up reading this instead. I just remembered how much I loved it and I was off reading this instead of your other story. I will get to BTB eventually. lol. Too bad you never wrote that Vincent sequel you were thinking of writing about. That would have been great to see a player get tamed. Hey, maybe you will write it one day for all I know.

This still has to be my favorite story on the entire site and I am glad to see you haven't taken it down. It's hard to find a good story that isn't filled with high school drama. I hope you continue to write!

a very sweet story. i like the way the story flows for finn n miranda

BAHAHAHAHA! I love Finn and his rules :P

omg, that's HILARIOUS! I want to play that with someone one day :P Actually, it reminds me of this improv game that I played in a competition... hmm... anyway!

you're story was amazing! i was never annoyed with any one of the characters and they were so realistic. my favorite one had to be vincent. haha. he definitely made the story more entertaining =]

great writing. I loved this- Finn, Miranda, Finn's friends, how they met in writing class and became friends (and more), through that. the big contrast between Miranda meeting Finn's parents, and Finn charming hers. and I love the references, and how he asked her to come with him. and their bantering. lovely story.

Love this!! So... he is looking for a Queen huh? She could take that one of many ways! Great start... can't wait to read more!

xoxo
jennie

I hope one day, I can write like you. And I also hope you know how incredibly talented you are.

That was such an addicting story. Every time I started reading it, I didn't want to stop. It was really good. The chemistry between the two was amazing and it was really well-written. The only thing that bugged me were the homonyms (I'm pretty sure that's the right word) you used. You would use 'here' instead of 'hear' or something stupid like that. It wasn't that big of a deal but it still bugged me a little. The whole traveling/setting thing was a bit confusing to me too but I got the gist of it near the end. Anyways, that was really good and I liked it a lot :D

This is so creative and it's really interesting so far. Finn seems like an amazing character that I can't wait to read more about :)

this is my second time reading this amazing story. i hope your still considerigna spin off about vincent because i would definately read it :D

that was truly a light hearted story
i liked how the conflict wasn't overly dramatic because i think theres too much of that nowadays.
however, i think the title doesn't provide your story with enough justice. I cant pinpoint it exactly but there is something just blatantly obvious about it almost boring.
while the story itself has a lot of wit the title is lackluster.
i think a new title would be much better, so yeah.
anyway, thanks for the read!
i truly enjoyed it =)

joey