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| AllyCred 2005-04-04 ch 1,  | abuse*WOW*...*Amazing*...*Brilliant*...i love it...the beat if great and the wording is just amazing...this is a superb piece of writing...great poem. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Akhenaten 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abusewow. WOW. actually, wow doesn't begin to describe it. BRILLIANT especially the part about worms picking down yesterdays hero... LOVED IT with a passion. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, although perhaps alter the "i'll be there"s ever so slightly each time so the repitition doesn't become overbearing. |