I love fantasy stories; I love this story. You prelogue was very interesting... but if it was longer, people would be more likely to read though it is very good.

I like the character Bobby.. I hope he is used more in the story or at least mentioned more.

Continue Soon. veyr good!

Lacey,Another addicting story? lol.. jk its awesome so far... I cant wait to hear the rest... hurry with the next chapter...lol... send me an email sometime? whats new in your life?lol...Always,Cass