I have no suggestions that could improve this, I think its really good!

The repetition of 'maybe' is almost overdone, but not quite. If the poem had been any longer it would have. It might help if you had a common theme, like love or friendship, instead of seemingly random things, like going from fireflies to the sun to love to angels. I still like this, though. You pulled it together quite well.

um...i like the maybe at the beginning of every line, but it just feels like it's missing something. good job though, thanx bunches 4 the review!

i like the repetition! however, dont let this patern restrict your writing. i worry that rhyming and a word pattern are limiting the words and ideas you can convey in one poem. other than that i liked it. thanks for reviewing my poem (daggers), you said you were familliar with the subject so i went for one about friendship.

It's rough, and some of the 'parts' really wasn't suited for a 'maybe' but it was a good poem nevertheless. Reminded me of when I was younger and would take a dandelion and blow it or take a daisy and say 'I love you, I love you not.' I did that even when I didn't love someone, heh!

I really liked this, usually, I think it strange when all the lines start with the same word, but in this case, it worked really well! My compliments! ^^