Reviews for Visions of Paradise

CircusCandy 2005-08-15 ch 1,	abusewelli like itnot sure u need some of those ; and , and . at the end of some of datt. ~oceans 11~
cOOkiMoNsteR626 2005-04-29 ch 1,	abusethis is awesome...loved the line about the leaves winking. that was unique and it caught me because i've never heard it used that way before. anyway, excellent!
Infinite Abyss 2005-04-20 ch 1,	abuseGreat poem.
Greatheart 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abuseHey! Awesome sonnet! I just heard it today in class...it was good then too. Pop over to mine and lemme know what you think. Again, mad props (HA!).
thisspiltmilk 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abusei love it. very well written. gosh liz, why do you have to be so darn physical, or great at writing, or both.
Taka and Keichirou 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abuseexcellent work...well laid out...T