I have read two poems of yours - this and "The Carnival" (I think) and both have been amazing. I just wanted to say that I really love your work! Keep it up!Siouxsie x

Wow.. this is also really good. I like it alot. you ahve a sweet voice. Well done!

Very deep, full of feelings.

Great job!

Deep...nice work!

wow...Nice inner meaning (or from what I can attempt). This is truly one of your best. -ADD

simply...amazing. you've left me speechless with your talent; i love the way you wrote this piece and your wording. i don't know how to tell you how great your poem is. lol, my only critism is, it was too pretty. just playing! - beautiful poem, please write more!

Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.

What a beautiful poem! Good job, and kudos on the review _

this is a super poem, it has alot of emtion. i totally loved it. infection

Beautiful...

Wow, great use of words... Amazing!

rhyme is awesome. I love the emotions that intertwine with the descriptive words. You have gret potential. I love your work so far and keep it up!

Sorrow

Damn, you made me cry. I got chills. Very pretty.

hmm, romantic and spirtual indeed. very nice, and this poem makes you want to go, "aw". i especially like these lines:"But don’t despair anymore

Reach out and embrace

The lost ray of light

That smile from before"

-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

BEautiful, I am at a loss for words on this peice. Amazing detail and beautifully put. - Amazing work ot art. Your word choice is powerful and the poem is sweet, tender and slightly bitter sweet. - A lovely poem, I love it. -

!* Noelle *!