Hey there, Tigra! I haven't been here in a while, but I am glad to see a post from you! And I must say, it is far removed from your previous style--I see you've done a complete revamp, and it is apparent in this poem. I like it, though! It is very good! It has this lilting, lonely, creaking-swing-in-the-wind feel to it--actually, the poem has more of an atmosphere than most poems I've ever read. It seems you have changed as a writer since last we met up, but your skills have only increased. :) This is a very descriptive piece. Lovely work, I hope to see more from you!