Oh now this just rawked!

wow, wow, wow! that's all i can say. this has to be one of the best poems i've ever read!

I've felt like a lost piece before too.

WHAHAHAHAHA New penname_ koolers Megmegmeg joined joined joined joined! Great poem, i looked aat it ten times, but never actually reviewed lol

keep writing!

Great job, thanks for reviewing my song. I have only one question, this line: in order to be hear(heard, or here?) I got a little confused there, but it's still good. Nice job. _

That was good. I have to admit that I am more of a poems that tell a story kinda guy, but it was very good. Can tell it took alot of thought.

i enjoyed the moral ) nicely done.

very good i really enjoyed it keep writing

This is a cool poem. ((About your review... yes, I am a huge romantic. :P)) It does seem, in our society, like one person can't do one thing, but you're right - as soon as people get together, we can do anything. It's nice to see a poem like this.

to cover an disguise, "an" , "A"Otherwise great flow. It has a slow pace, with many breaks, great meaning.

This was wonderful. It reminds me of al the things I do and how often I get overheard even when I'm the leader. I think this poem has a grat message!

wow... Deep and straight to the point. Great job. -ADD

great poem! i totally concur, we, alone, r naught but pieces in a grand puzzle

keep up the great work!

Amazing. I loved it. A great and inspiring message.

Preach it! that is what the world needs to hear...and we need to stand together...right on topic... i agree! Luvs, ML