Thank you for writing!

It's beautiful and I adore it. Very good...

That was beautiful. Don't stop your poetry.

cool... great poem. I have to say, you do write pretty good.

Hi again! AH!! Your poems so ROCK! ^_^ (And I mean it) I especially loved the last few lines, where there's sort of a sad twist to the poem. But as I have mentioned in my review for "I'll Never Feel Our First Sweet Kiss", you could improve the paragraphing more. ^_^ I also liked the way you described the girl in the poem, with simple yet apt adjetives that add to the melancholy. Heh. I'll be reading! ^_^

~Kaze of the Sand