you should, like... update.

my name's aubrey! except i'm a chick... whatever. i can totally see the similarities... =]

i love cherish! he's so cute, like a little puppy and tracey's so nice to him!

ugh. i hate Tracy. all Californians are not surfers, damn it! typical Californian moms are not gorgeous! you should have said that he was from Southern California, not just California.
anyways.
your fic is ok, i guess. the thing that annoys me is that the protaganists are all TOO good, too kind, too perfect. and Kevin is the typical Big Bad Homophobe. you should try to add depth to your characters.
and also, what is Cherish's mysterious disorder? you never gave it a name, all you said was that it keeps him in the mind of a kid. you should have named it, cos leaving it blank made it seem like you didn't really think through the fic, just added in a convenient disorder to make a cutesy character.
oh, and another thing that bothers me: all of the gay/bisexual/cool or nice characters were good-looking. okay, so i like to make the two boys somewhat cute, too--but isn't making ALL of them gorgeous going a little overboard?
oh, and by the way: i really liked the names Cherish and Aubrey. they're cool (:
please don't take offense to this review. tons of authors make these mistakes, and im sure that i do, as well. i just decided to finally give someone some constructive critism.
-kon

love the story, can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

that's so scary, it's stuff like that that make me wonder maybe there really is some god up there controlling all of our lives. but then you know, i push those silly thoughts from my head. it's just fate is all.

i'm hoping that this will have a positive impact on the relationship between Kevin and the rest of the boys. is Kevin one of those homophobes who's actually gay and just makes fun of other gay people cause he hates himself for being gay in the first place? tht would be cool.

tracey and dustin should get together! that would be so cute. does cherish have a crush on tracey? cause that would be cute too, in a little kid sorta way.

well, i really love this story. its so awesome, i can't wait to read more!!

Oohh - Drugs = BAD!! -_-; Tsk tsk - Lucky thing Kev. Got a ride or he'd be in a lotta pain right now O_O; It's cool, I really liked this chapter! definatly found out a bit more about Kevin which is awesome ;) Maybe he';s not so bad after all?? (Glee) - I still think he's kinda stupid :P But thats just me, maybe he'll get better ya?

Hm...Methinks Kevin is a bit too against all this gay and bi business...Is it possible that he's not straight himself? Wow...How delightful...There could be a love triangle...It'd certainly give you more to write about (which also means more for us to read)...

this story is great! Can't wait to read more!

Aww this is such an aweosme Story! it's too bad a lot of them seem to have a darker past than they like to let on :( - I'm kind curious about Kevin though - Will there be a fight?? :D I can't wait to read the next chapter! Oh please hurry.BTW - I LOVE the name Aubrey Very cool!

That was absolutely wonderful, an excellent chapter. You're a very talented writer :) Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Yeah okay, still can't keep my mouth shut...

Aubrey is absolutly adorable...And I really wish I had a parent like that...I'm not sure what my parents would say if I brought up sex...they'd probably ask who I had in mind...That's about as far as the convo would get too...

I hope you update more quickly...These characters are so lovely it's hard waiting for more of them...

alright so I know I said I was going to be a silent reader but I think my mouth's a bit too big not to talk...Okay yes I've already read this...I just wanted to reread it i guess...I love Aubrey...

I've got to say, mood music really makes a story more fun...I was listening to "who am I" by Casting Crows while i read this...I didn't realize until I looked up the lyrics to give to you that it was a religious song...It sounds pretty good with the chapter if you ignore the religious bit of it though...

Who am I? That the Lord of all the earth,Would care to know my name,Would care to feel my hurt.Who am I? That the bright and morning star,Would choose to light the way,For my ever wandering heart.

Chorus:Not because of who I am,But because of what you've done.Not because of what I've done,But because of who you are.

I am a flower quickly fading,Here today and gone tomorrow,A wave tossed in the ocean,(ocean)A vapor in the wind.Still you hear me when I'm calling,Lord, you catch me when I'm falling,And you've told me who I am.I am yours.I am yours.

Who am I? That the eyes that see my sinWould look on me with loveAnd watch me rise again.Who am I? That the voice that calmed the sea,Would call out through the rain,And calm the storm in me.

Chorus 2x

I am yours.I am yours.

Whom shall I fear?Whom shall I fear?'Cause I am yours.I am yours.

Try listening to it while you read the chapter...Quite fun...

*Sob* You made such nice characters! xD I can't make characters with like... complex personalites-- though I wish I did! I don't really have much to say, since my brain is sort of muddled do to a problem a good friend of mine has but..

Awesome story and please, do UPDATE! *Begs*

damn, wow, wow, dude next chapter please. i actually didnt find anymistakes so good for you. hurry thou.

Soo cool... I can't wait to read the next chapter when you get it done...

Hey Freak! lol. Great chapter as always! Then again, you knew that seeing as I read it when I was home and told you so in person. Even if you didn't let me kill off Kevin. Evil bugger that he is! Grr! I still say that you should have let me kill the little snot! *pouts* He better have something mean happen to him later in the story, or I'll start leaving bad reviews, and you wouldn't want that from your friend, now would you? Then again, you'd probably just leave me bad reviews too...lol. Anyway, yeah! Great chapter as always, and you better hurry up and finish chapter seven. Scottie told me you were working on it, and I expect it to be up soon! And call me sometime you bum! lol.

Lira Star out!