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| Alisha Marie 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I really liked the imaganation was nice. Great job! |
| DementedOracle 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I've finally read the whole thing. What a story! This would make such a good fireside tale, if it could be memorized. It's not perfect (there are a couple places around the beginning of the middle where the rhythm breaks a bit), but it's still fantastic. A great work of imagination. |