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| SagaciousPnay 2005-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh I like the question form of this poem. It reminds me of me in many ways. Cool job. |
| Blimple 2005-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseWow, thats so pretty and true well done. :) |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseOh yes, such a simple questions, yet one that can never be truely answered. You have many good points written. I love the line "Why?It's like a question of cancer" That just made me think, that is so right. Keep it up. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI really agree with that. I don't understand the question either. I love the flow and the meaning to it. The rhyme is awesome! Excellent! |
| Lost Soldier REVAMPED 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this. I ask "why" all the time, and rarely do I get a good answer. Cool poem. |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abusethis poem is slightly confusing, I hate wondering why, that is the most complicated question, and alot of people have yet to find the answer. Lady Solitaire |
| DementedOracle 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuse"Why?"If only people would try-If only people would open their eyesTo see that the issue is "what?",Not "Why?"To question life so is a torture, butTo see life before your eyes;In that secret picture you'll realize,That's life about the things you touch,And feel under your fingertips.When you live in the world around you,"Why?"Should never deem to grace your lips. |