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Reviews For: Kitsune Kiyo chapter nine parts one and two
bloody-kitsune 2005-04-06 . chapter 1
ar the suspense is killing me plz continue ir i will die a horible death.
Tenshi-of-hikari 2005-04-05 . chapter 1
Well good chapter except that I can't figure out who's point of view the story is in because it seems to switch back and forth.

Also I think you made a grammer mistake here:

And I believe his was caught a little off guard by this question.

You should change the his in this sentence to he. Because that makes much more sense.

Anyways good chapter so far and keep up the good work...
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