I really like the rhythm and fast pace of this poem. It has a wonderful flow. Great job!

Heya sorry for not reveiwing in a while but my life, yes I developed one recently, got in the way.

This poem had alot more of a dark element than your earlier stuff. It's really good and very strong

Seems like an angry poem...I like it!

its good. i like the sense of anger i feel from u when u wrote this. very well done