i like it a lot. it makes me feel wistful.. ^_^

you're right, they don't seem to fit. I love the creme-brulee tree, though, absolutely fabulous. I think that you swtich from talking about a "thing" to call your own to a "place," which might account for some of the discrepancies. But the list made me smile. Nice! =)

weve all dreamed of that... great descriptions & thanks for your review

I like it... it seems kind of random but I like it! Keeping writing I look forward to reading more of you stuff later.~Bethy

Wow.. This poem was a lot of fun to read. I like it.