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Darkest Angels 2005-06-06 . chapter 1
This is a really good poem. I know how you feel about saying 'People who belong in the dark instead of the lightPeople who aren't wanted in this world'.. that is how i feel everyday. i can relate to other parts too. great poem. i love the way you express you emotions in it. Darkest Angels
Tiffany Baughman 2005-05-18 . chapter 1
Angel baby, you do belong here. I know that right now you may feel like you don't, but trust me, you do. ~holds you close~ and if you ever need someone to talk to about anything, you know where to turn... come to me or dad, baby. You know you can always talk to John. Please don't go back suicide. It would hurt me more than everything. you know that baby.
lindserly 2005-04-19 . chapter 1
i love this line: People who belong in the dark instead of the light

but in reality no one belongs in the dark. society just makes it that way.

great poem.
Paige Marie Halliwell 2005-04-12 . chapter 1
Angel, i'm sorry about everything. Daddy knows you. I'm Tiffany. You know me as Greg's daughter. These are really good poems, though
firewitch1soulwriter 2005-04-07 . chapter 1
Once again, I can relate. Great poem. By the way...*hug* pass it on.

-Britt
haha 2005-04-06 . chapter 1
good poem !very dramatic.
AllyCred 2005-04-05 . chapter 1
i know how you feel so much...this is amazingly well written...so much emotion i can really feel it...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
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